Lindsay Kaeding's Mock up
Lindsay Kaeding's mock up for her site.
posted by Tim A. @ 2:08 PM
This blog is for IDD 410 at Quinnipiac University with Prof. Greg Garvey. This will include comments, information, and criticisms about web authoring. Also included will be reactions to the book "Site-Seeing: A Visual Approach To Web usability" by Luke Wroblewski.
1 Comments:
Looks good Tim!
I like the typeface for my name but I think the glow around it needs to be softened a little more.
I also think that the background texture could be something more delicate to go along with the leaf. The brick/patchwork is heavy; perhaps maybe a watercolor artistic texture or simply having a solid gradient would work better.
I like the earth tone colors and I really like how they look against the water droplets on the leaf. I’m not sure if the yellow outline around the design works well. Maybe using a darker green or that brown/maroon color I see in the gradient, would look nicer.
I like the text and the positioning of it, but I think it would work better if the two text bodies to the right were not lined up against the edge. Give it a little more room in between the edge and the text and it would work well.
Overall you did a good job and I really like the theme of the design.
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